Into The Mystic

A place of the unknown full of beauty and peace! A place to escape from the world around us.

       Pastel thoughts, a compass into the mystic

       Where endless beauty resides in shades of light,

       and blessings are a reality in the deepest part of a beating heart

       Sounds come in the wind whispering peace upon the calm

       A delicate breeze is a reflection of tenderness

       That sets in the center of emotions,

       Breathing in limitless time

       Shadows blend with love,

       Leaving a glow that can see beyond the night

       Scented sunrise brings a new beginning

       With scenes from a path down memory lane,

       Singing a melody with lavender dreams

       As silence sings along the misty horizon

       Freedom will go on as we travel the beauty of the unknown,

       and life seems to disappear

       Into the mystic

       

Reviews

[Florin Dragoș Minc..]

Interesting approach focused on sensations and emotions. Indicates a gate to mystical dimensions.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Fran Marie]

A lovely poem well written
in poetic beauty and expression
Nice job on this one..

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[John Carver]

You can really write. No wonder so many read and comment. But what did you say here? The eye of a mystic leads only to fairytales like the Fairytale of Sin in 2362 when Satan stars in that fairtytale he invented too but which consumes him. All things are real if only real fairytales but not true. Only what's in Christ is true and real the rest deception. Be very careful when you treat reality as nothing even what imagine was, is or will be true if you become a god of heaven and not just remain in the masses a man or woman of heaven without enough faith to believe you are a god, man forever among man then too. It makes me think. I like that. Too bad you killed it in the end. It is a very bittersweat poem because of that better left with no ending. I love you. You are the answer to my prayers. But I refuse to copy anyone now I know who and what I am.

[KAREN]

Thanks for the read!

[M. J. Smith]

Beautiful! You remind me of a long ago night when two lovers lay together under a tree reading love poems to each other. Good times long past...
Thank you for the memory.

[KAREN]

Thank you for stopping by and reading!

[M. J. Smith]

You are most welcome.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"And I wanna rock your gypsy soul
Just like way back in the days of old
Then magnificently we will float
Into the mystic" Van Morrison Into the Mystic

This was so soft and sweetly beautiful, it wraps the reader in a cotton candy cocoon of pink sunsets and strawberry wine. The flow is comforting and easy finishing with all the gentleness and tenderness with which it began. I enjoyed your poem very much. F.

[KAREN]

Thank you so much!

[Lisasview]

Lovely poem..
Life seems to disappear into the mystic..love that line!!
Thank you for sharing..
Lisa

[KAREN]

Thank you for reading!

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome..

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow. This poem took my breath away. A really captivating poem.

[KAREN]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved the complete poem my dear friend.
"Scented sunrise brings a new beginning
With scenes from a path down memory lane,
Singing a melody with lavender dreams
As silence sings along the misty horizon"
The above lines. Are so wonderful and thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[KAREN]

Thank you, dear friend, for the review!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my dear friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a new beginning...out with the disruptive thoughts, this is a calming poem with its soft
imagery.
I like the line, "Shadows blend with love"
j.

[KAREN]

Thank you for reading and the nice review!

[Cherrie Palmer]

I think about how the wind kicks up with the rising sun. Making a scented sunrise 🌅. So beautiful.

[KAREN]

Thank you for the review!