Symbols Of Love

Symbols Of Love

A Poem by KAREN

Things that causes you to love a person!


Your love

that lives deep in my


Like the blood pumping through its  valves.

Your kisses

that wet my lips:

Like the early morning dew.

Your smile

that melts my soul:

Like the flame of a candle.

Your eyes

that watch over


Like the angels above.

Your arms

that hold me


Like the wedding ring on my finger.

Your voice

that whispers in my


Like soft music playing.

Your promises

that you never


Like the beating of my


© 2011 KAREN

Author's Note

Trying a new set up! Tell me what you think?

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I love this. Made me remind of someone I love so much! This clearly states what I am feeling whenever he does things like that. It's like you're speaking on behalf of me. Very well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago

A pleasing romantic piece... well shaped, with a sense of incantation, a magic spell that refledcs the intensity of feelings in the writing...

Posted 12 Years Ago

A true portrayal of love and passion ...... loved it from the start till
the end , awesome write i am shelfing it right away !

Posted 12 Years Ago

A beautiful story of love and desire in the poem. Each additional line making the poem stronger and giving the poem reason and purpose. A very good ending to a outstanding poem of love.

Posted 12 Years Ago

beautiful and flowing and (if you'll excuse my natural country boy brashness) just sexy as hell. really felt this one. felt like it flowed straight from your heart. well done! great poetry!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Nicely composed, good flow.. I liked this..

Posted 12 Years Ago

I love it. A wonderful love poem, it works perfectly.

Posted 12 Years Ago

What a lovely thought..!!! Lovely way of expression..!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago

i must agree, this was so heartfelt and profound, real beautiful too. this was real sweet writing here, and i sure am liking this new format. i know i'm such a science nerd but i think it''ll be better writing "Like the blood pumping through my veins" or something like that since valves are attached to the veins and the heart. this was great work. awesome!

Posted 12 Years Ago

yah I like the format..It blends in nicely with this poem because you are trying to write one with different ideas based on a single theme of love..As always, I admire your romanticism, it is warm and genuine and your lines and ideas always reflect that..I really enjoyed the kiss analogy with early morning dew..I am kind of sucker for that kind of phrases..Thanks

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on January 24, 2011
Last Updated on March 3, 2011
Tags: love, heart, smile, kisses, arms



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