Where The Vampires Live

For the creative poetry group

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

She glares in the mirror

Reflections of gorey blood,

Horrid screams peer back

Long black finger nails trail across the glass

Fake fangs are placed into her mouth

Soon she'll be a real vampire

 

Black cape flaps in the breeze

Full moon shines in the darkness

Music blares from her ipod

Not country

Not rock-n-roll

But scary tunes she dances to

 

Wolfs howl in the distance

Bats dive down, red eyes searching

Her heart pounds with anticipation

Shadows creep behind her

Horrified whispers flow

 

Scent of death nears

She knows she is near the place

Where vampires roam

Her neck awaits for the sharp bite

 

Red scarlet blood drips from mouths

Eyes glow like the moon

Ghostly shadows behind her scream violently

 

A male vampire walks up

Warm hands take her willing body

Moans of pleasure escapes her as fangs

Sink into her waiting neck

Transformation happens instantly

 

Strength serges through her body

Teeth are now pointed fangs

Hungar for  another's blood grows

Eyes scan the darkness

Her prey stands close by

Mouth clamps down

 

"Cut!"

 

"How did I do?"

 

"Your teeth fell out

Take two,

And action!"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[VelvetRosetta]

LMAO...Had me on edge then laughed my a*s off! Good one!

[Matt Shriver]

Very cool. The ending was awesome. Really funny and quite a nice little twist. It was also very well written. Lots of good imagery and description. Really cool piece of writing here. Well done.

[Amila Jay]

Yep, the ending was really unexpected, great write:)

[Sarah]

It's amazing the end is very unexpecting. but overall it is lovely.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good write..!!!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Love the humor! The ending sure surprised me. Outstanding vampire poem!!

[Angel Bluestocking]

i love it! its funny. at the beginning it was dark but in the end i just laughed.

[Tina Kline]

I chuckled at the end, didn't see that coming! A wonderful and enjoyable tale in this poem.

[Shep]

Love the last part it made me laugh "cut how did I do? Nicely done. Love how your mind works.

[Enigma]

Wow. You built the creepy scene with every possible detail and then suddenly, out of the blue, changed the whole scenario. Loved it. Absolutely brilliant. :D