Im just a human

you hate ma and i know 

you left me 

when i needed you 

you walked away 

when i was begging you to stay ..

Do you think that you are right ?

Do you think that is the best way ?

Do you think that i will be better ?

Do you think that you are good ?

                                                                          I admit that im worthless 

                                                                          I admit that im bad 

                                                                          I admit that im mistaken 

                                                                          I admit about every bad thing i did

                                               But look around you 

with an open eyes 

and light the flame 

in your hand and you will see 

                                                                               Im not a profit 

                                                                               Im not an angel 

                                                                               Im a regular human 

                                                                               just like you...

I don't think that you are better 

you have a lot of mistakes 

so you were just like me 

full of black spots 

so why do you only look on mine 

                                     why do you blame me now

                                           when im just a human ..

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

The craft you so well weave is a memorable feast in my opinion as it intrigues me ever more with its unique style and format.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Cool format. You pen emotions very well. I liked this poem a lot. Thanks for writing and sharing.

[EMF]

Scope. Perfect
Flow. Perfect
Format. Perfect.
Theme. Perfect.
Get the idea?

[Sakib]

I like the format. Great job.

[Jeremy Baker]

I like most of the statements and ideas in this poem, but none of the things you admit to - you are not, and never will be worthless or bad or anything like that. We are all human and need to accept that, forgive ourselves, and move on.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

The self questioning and awarness of feelings that takes a master and a good person to realise, both of which you are. Tremendous :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

Gosh... amazing poem. I love the format. Quite unique. And no, you're not worthless. Don't think like so... you're very talented. =D Keep writing..
I love the ending..so much..
It speaks the truth. ^o^

[deeps]

You're not worthless or bad or any of that,
I think you are very talented.
You seem nice to me,
I just loved the ending too.
It's true really.
This is so heartfelt and tugged.