You are over

You are over

 

I was always saying

“ I love you, and I will never walk away “

But now

All I can remember about you

Is your smiles and laughs

When I was calling your name

From under the ground

And when my hand reaches the ground

All what you did

Is step on it

And make me fall again

You never tried to help me out …

 

Now im saying that I’m done

All what you’ve done is enough

I think you won this round

But I was the winner in the big game

The game of life

Where you meet people …

 

Haven’t you recognized that

From your last :”I hate you”

I never tried to get you back

Don’t you know why !!

 

I will tell you

Last time you stepped on my hand

I fell so hard

I looked around

And I found someone who cry for me

I found someone who care for me

I found him ..

He hugged me so tight

And made me forget

All what you’ve done to me ..

 

Even though we are living under the ground

But we are happy

We can face the truth

With a smile

And make each other feel right

In my world

This is what called “REAL LOVE “

Goodbye my hurter ..

 

1:58 PM

17/9/2011

Suhad

Author's Note

Enjoy this :D

hope you like it :)

Reviews

[Sunni Davis]

This really spoke to me. As someone who's also been hurt by those who were supposed to love me, I understand the emotions involved in finally finding someone who helps you up when you are down and loves you for who you are. Your poem is inspiring and empowering.

[Amila Jay]

An excellent poem:)

[Leslie Philibert]

Good work,the living under the ground images gives the theme an unusual angle.
Like the line last time you stepped on my hand...Well done.

[Senseless whatever]

Very good write. Lots of feeling. I like how you lead the reader through your emotional turmoil and growth.

[Desmund Tiny]

I LOVE it..... you don't have to chase someone who keeps running away, you can have the person who's always there beside you..... ^^,

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

This was so short,
but portrays a great amount of meaning in it.

Nice job!

[Andrea Vargas]

I did like it !!! Wow what inspired this! I must know!!

excellent, beautiful expressions. Not a rant but a release from the it. Great job.

[Enigma]

You poems are always beautiful. i love the fonts and the use of colours. And you convey the message so clearly with your words that it becomes easy for the reader to feel and relate to the emotions. Well done.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Lovely..!!!

[Thea]

Aw, no dedication? Hmm... :)))

A very sincere poem...It's nice that you've found someone new... :)))