Should We Go On As Friends?

This is more likely a letter than a poem...

Unfold myself to you

It will be the last time

I won't show

I can't be in a friendship with no trust...

Wanna keep me?

If so...

Don't share my secrets...

Ok?

Author's Note

Honest Opinion As Always...
I know this is not a poem at all.... It's more likely a letter..

Reviews

[Carrion.]

sounds like a bunch of ranting turned into a beautiful string of lines.
c":

[light and ashes]

Great poem and true.

[Daytonight]

You say so much with so few words! Well done!

[sarah]

A letter that needed to be written great strong write!

[Magic plus the mayhem.]

I get this pome to well. So true... "I can't be in a friendship with no trust"

[Thea]

I like this!!! Haha! Sometimes, our greatest friends are the ones who betray us by sharing our secrets to other people and I hate it! >,<
Great short piece... :)))

[Jvl narasimharao]

the poem is simple, sweet and straight

[Desmund Tiny]

I love its message... I can relate to this... I adore this

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the straight forward and honest words. Real friends don't tell other of your weaknesses or secrets. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[stars are far]

this is great ..
the feelings are expressed well