Should We Go On As Friends?

Should We Go On As Friends?

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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This is more likely a letter than a poem...

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Unfold myself to you
It will be the last time
I won't show
I can't be in a friendship with no trust...
Wanna keep me?
If so...
Don't share my secrets...
Ok?

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Honest Opinion As Always...
I know this is not a poem at all.... It's more likely a letter..

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sounds like a bunch of ranting turned into a beautiful string of lines.
c":

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great poem and true.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You say so much with so few words! Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A letter that needed to be written great strong write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I get this pome to well. So true... "I can't be in a friendship with no trust"

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this!!! Haha! Sometimes, our greatest friends are the ones who betray us by sharing our secrets to other people and I hate it! >,<
Great short piece... :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


the poem is simple, sweet and straight

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love its message... I can relate to this... I adore this

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the straight forward and honest words. Real friends don't tell other of your weaknesses or secrets. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is great ..
the feelings are expressed well

Posted 12 Years Ago



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