"My Savior."

"My Savior."

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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For You..

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Betrayed and screwed over
Thought you could keep a secret
Now I know I was wrong
You're an open book
Just one touch; you will get the whole story.


Never thought you were like that
Thought you wouldn't betray me
Now I realize; you're no good to me
If you think you are, why did you do it then?


Thought you were My Savior?
My bestfriend?
Am I right or wrong?


Leave me here
Don't look back
Run away and hurt me.


Screw you!!


Written By: A Fallen Heroine.
Date: 8th Of September.
Dedication: My So Called "Savior"

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

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powerful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I can so relate to this! Great writing! Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


It is extremely frustrating and hurts equally bad to have your well kept secrets strewn around for everyone to know. I loathe such people. The anger you feel is justified and has, I guess, helped create another poem that is intense and frank.
Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can relate to it! Oh, it made me think of a friend who caused a lot of trouble to me by sharing my secrets to other people...
You penned your emotions very well! Love this piece... :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha I Love It! Its Full of Honesty and Directness

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dang.. you really know to how channel your anger through your poems. Such pain overwhelms the words written. It's honest and direct.
Always a wonderful work from you!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can feel the anger in this poem. Being betrayed of your bestfriend, I can relate ...... very nice poem and I love it...... thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The raw anger and trauma here is palpable.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Strong and direct words. Hard to find out someone you cared for. Broke your heart. I agree with the escape. Better to run then be burned a second time. Thank you for you excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


pain ..this was well expressed

Posted 12 Years Ago



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