"My Savior."

"My Savior."

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.

For You..

Betrayed and screwed over
Thought you could keep a secret
Now I know I was wrong
You're an open book
Just one touch; you will get the whole story.

Never thought you were like that
Thought you wouldn't betray me
Now I realize; you're no good to me
If you think you are, why did you do it then?

Thought you were My Savior?
My bestfriend?
Am I right or wrong?

Leave me here
Don't look back
Run away and hurt me.

Screw you!!

Written By: A Fallen Heroine.
Date: 8th Of September.
Dedication: My So Called "Savior"

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.

Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

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Pain filled words.. I hope in the end some peace could be found...xx

Posted 12 Years Ago

It really is strong emotions in this poem, I can almost feel the betrayal. And I can definitely relate. Great job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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very powerful emotions.
Sorry someone messed with you.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Strong emotions flow through this poem from the great betrayal you feel, from knowing that your only friend would stab you in the back. This is nothing uncommon, it just depends on who you put your trust in.

"You're an open book
Just one touch; you will get the whole story."

The one who knows the whole story is the one who would get fucked in the end. I promise you that.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Very honest and emotional write... I love the analysis of the situation that evokes emotions in the reader as it is adresses to the 'reader' rather than him/her...so that adds more power and intensity. Awesome read :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on September 8, 2011
Last Updated on September 8, 2011


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Hello my dear readers, I'm so sorry I won't post that much... God bless you all. (: ~A Risen Heroine~ more..


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