the stories were wrong

the stories were wrong

A Poem by Sunny

It's pretty simple.

It surprised me that
aurora was her name
it was fit for a princess 
fragile and beautiful
she looked fearless 
with no need of saving
she didn't fit a 
servant girl either
i guess she couldn't
fit into fairy tales. 

Until i saw
she was the little
girl hiding in secret
watching and listening
sneaking around the
king's castle
once the prince
caught her and
fell in love with her eyes
and that's how
she became the
princess of the land.

© 2014 Sunny

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Very well writtten I enjoyed reading the simplicity of your writing. I loved how you wrote it too

Posted 9 Years Ago

Sometimes the simplest stories are the most honest stories and that's why I like

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's never a bad thing for a character to be different or not seem to fit into fairytales. No one should be forced into a certain category. Not everyone needs saving cause some, even women, have such power to safe themselves. It's amazing how many people are so underestimated by society these days...

Posted 9 Years Ago


9 Years Ago

I know that it isn't bad. I think that's what I liked so much about her, to be honest, but thanks fo.. read more

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3 Reviews
Added on August 23, 2014
Last Updated on August 23, 2014



beaumont, TX

I'm Sunny, and I'm probably bored at the moment. My poems are really easy understand, too. (It's actually pretty pathetic.) And don't be shy to mail me a letter. I can literally make a conversat.. more..

april 23 april 23

A Poem by Sunny

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A Poem by Sunny