Ice and Snow

Ice and Snow

A Poem by Liz Gonzales Aguilar

Ice and snow, crystal glass,

Steady heartbeat, one last breath

Fading laughter,  fading time,

The notes got to me and changed my mind

My sights collide...

No strength to deny...

Catch your rosebuds, hear your name,

If I'm ready I can take the blame

Unsheltered houses,  who I am,

And maybe I don't understand.

I'm transparent

I don't believe in faking my lullabies

And when I believe it

That's when I'm waiting for someone

To see my  light.


Wasting time, I don't know why.

My sights collide...

No strength to deny...

 


© 2012 Liz Gonzales Aguilar


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I really enjoyed this write here,
The notes got to me and changed my mind
My sights collide...
No strength to deny...
These lines here, caught my attention, Awesom write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed all your poems so far. This is my favorite one.
"I don't believe in faking my lullabies
And when I believe it
That's when I'm waiting for someone
To see my light."
A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Liz Gonzales Aguilar
Liz Gonzales Aguilar

Quezon City, Philippines



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I am just a nobody telling everybody about a Somebody who can save anybody. I'm so crazy about this Somebody. And I'm not changing that. Ever. God saves me. it is impossible for me to save myself. .. more..

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