Distance

Sometimes it’s your words that touch me…
Sometimes it’s your soul that teases me…
But all I know I have you for now…
That makes my world complete…
If you could hear the music of my heart beats ,
It would whisper your name 
I would be anything anywhere, 
Just to be with you…
Life is what happens when we are busy planning…
but I love how my life has turned upside down 

when heart decides so, distance doesn't matter…
for the time will stand still when we will meet… 

If you have to walk away someday

I might not be able to stop you

But you will take away with you a piece of me

That I love the most

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

Beautiful poem, speaking the reality, one of the most amazing poems i have read till date...
I could feel all the sentiments of each word, most related to my poems 'i am gonna miss you' and 'i'll wait for you'. I loved each sense of this poem, I would be happy if you check out my poems too..
thanks for sharing,
Anindita

[Ardra]

Thanks a lot for the kind words....it's a fragment of my soul .....I shared ...glad you could feel the sentiments I would be very glad to check your creations ......

[Anindita Janhabee]

Its my pleasure dear, and thanks too...
Love is one of the best pieces unlike friendship...read moreIts my pleasure dear, and thanks too...
Love is one of the best pieces unlike friendship...
There is no life possible without certain things like these...
ANINDITA

[Coyote Poetry]

I do understand this poem. After the love is strong. We cannot live without. Thank you Ria for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ardra]

Thanks a lot for taking time to read my work :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Silver]

You surely have a way to describe your inner soul and heart , you are blessed and talented at the same time

You painted a beautiful smile on my lips now , I would call it the taste of love

[Ardra]

Thanks a lot for reading and the review appreciate your kindness :)

[Silver]

You are welcome Ria

[Philip Muls]

Distance is a good title because your poem lays claim to the fact that it is of no importance in true love.

Genuine and hearthfelt poem. Well done.

[Ardra]

Thanks a lot for reading and the review , appreciate the same.

[Randhir kaur]

I really loved the style of ur writing..Truely an amazing write...

[Ardra]

thanks dear for the kind review :)

[Randhir kaur]

Mention not buddy...

[Sandra Nair]

Excellent work, and nice lines. I compared the first two lines with the love of my mother .

[Ardra]

thank you dear , when i rote it i dint think of it, but yes it can be a love of mom towards her kids too even when they are far off or they make a new life for them she would still love them :)

[Sandra Nair]

Welcome, Ria.

[JMaster1]

your words are beautiful . Good love poem , as usual :)

[Ardra]

thank you :) for the review