For once we will be us

You always make me want more of you...
This distance and the destiny...stands in our way...
Every day I dream of us....in our wonderland...
Even when I know... it will always be dreams ..nothing more ...nothing less.

The dreams in which you always hold me close to your heart..I hear you whisper my name.
The dreams in which you kiss me tenderly...yet passion fills my soul...
The dreams in which you caress me,making me burn..
The dreams in which you fill me with you and ignite me with bliss
The dreams in which your hands are always in mine - promising me of eternal love.
The dreams in which you and I are no longer separate or desperate - we are one, one happy soul.

How I love these dreams that keeps me alive and takes my breath away.

Deep down I know it will only be in dreams we will be us.
I still have our dreams ....that no one can take away from me....
The life will go on....I will keep on dreaming....hoping some day the sea will bring you to me....the sky will shine bright....the stars will smile upon us....we will be us .... for once we will be us....

Reviews

[emmajoy]

This is intense yet reverent to love, to the need for something more than a wish or dream... We all need that little more that comes our way.. but perhaps separations are hurdles waiting to be climbed. One can only pray so.

Your feelings are so private, i feel like a voyeuse.. wondering if i should read a second time. But, no.. will leave prayerse for the tangible one day, when your words can be shared after a kiss. Beautiful writing, ' ..How I love these dreams that keeps me alive and takes my breath away '

[Ardra]

thanks a lot emma for the review :)
guess the hurdles are there so that we can overcome them.. someday for sure i would like to share my words after the kiss ;)
sending lots of love for your new day!

[emmajoy]

Smiling and nodding agreement. Thank you!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ahh but a man can only dream... I loved the sentiments here.. Beautifully conveyed ☺

[Ardra]

thanks dear ... one can only dream

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yes and wait for them to come true 😉
You are welcome ☺

[Davidgeo]

Wanting something without limit is the curse of sentience. Only a self aware thing can do that to itself.

Your repetition is forceful, well placed ("the dreams..")

The ending is weak. My shoes hurt right now, I'll tell you about the dogwater ending later...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
Beautiful.....
so much longing love and hope.......wishful dreamy love.......

Brilliant!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Ardra]

Yes wishful dreamy love.... thanks for reading :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome..............!!!! :) :)

[Daisy]

Your poetry is so full of positivity. Beautiful flow through sincere words. Lovely piece of writing!
Keep inspiring and yes dreaming ofourse :)

[Ardra]

thanks daisy for reading :) appreciate your kind words ...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Wow Ria, its so nice of you... You hv probably penned down my feelings.... When 2 souls are apart, following the hearts, then they only meet at one place.. that is in dreams... Dreams are the sweetest moments if you enjoy it and this poem is really special for me.. Thanks for writing such a beautiful one... All the sentences seem to hv their own feelings nd joy which make this reader feel great... Having hope is all that we can do in such situations...
Anindita : )

[Ardra]

thanks Anindita...i am glad this made you happy... dreams are sure special place

[Anindita Janhabee]

most welcome dear Ria...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

for once we will be us....that's the believe and hope in love! Amazing poem :)

[Ardra]

Thank you for the review :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome Ria :)

[Shabeeh Haider]

You are spot on. Dreams will always be ours. No one can snatch them from us.
There is a lot of longing and pain in your words but the hope that the dreams will keep you together is so heart rendering.
Sometimes it is these dreams that give us the strength to move on in life.

[Ardra]

Thanks a lot for stopping by.... appreciate your review.... :)

[Shabeeh Haider]

It was a pleasure reading this

[An owl on the moon]

Your words bring such life to dreams, awakening them in the most wondrous way. Beautiful. Dreams are so often seeds, and they grow around us to fulfill every longing. And even when some dreams don't become any more than a seed, their profound light remains.

[Ardra]

Thanks a lot craig for the sweet review ...always appreciate your presence in my world....

[Coyote Poetry]

Old dreams are hard to release.
"The life will go on....I will keep on dreaming....hoping some day the sea will bring you to me....the sky will shine bright....the stars will smile upon us....we will be us .... for once we will be us...."
I liked the above lines. Old age make all good and bad days better or less painful. Thank you Ria for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ardra]

It's a dream I want to hold on till my old age.... so some day to meet this dream of mine. ..and to die a peaceful death in his arms.... :) I love how you still remember all the loved ones and dedicate poems to each of them....it's such a sweet guesture

[Coyote Poetry]

We must my friend.