Dear Diary.

A poem too the only thing that can take everything I say and never walk away.

Dear Diary,

You've been here for the show.

You've felt all of my insecurities

You've felt me letting go.

 

You know all of me.. Deep too the core.

You know all of my thoughts.

You know I'm always wanting more.

 

You see my worries and you've seen my fears.

You see my life in full view 

You see all of my tears.

 

You get me in a way that no one else will.

You stick around too hear my pain.

You keep listening till you have your fill.

 

I wish everyone was like you diary, they'd never walk away.

It's me there walking from diary..

I realize that everyday.

Author's Note

Tell me how you feel. I need the feedback.

Reviews

[Smith Courtney]

I really like this one Sydney :) I've read all of your poems now if your wondering and your very talented! Though, I do not keep a diary, this is really inspiring. you can really feel the hurt and insecureness in this and it flows nicely. Great job :)

[Arabdha]

i like this one best..a diary is always your best friend..it never go away..it never argues..its just always there..a constant companion..

[Daydreamer54]

wOW, I HEAR THE SADNESS AND THE GRATEFULNESS in this poem. ;m sure we all fell that no one understands us at times. At least inanimate objects don;t judge us and I like writing becuz it;s a way tpo let our our feelings. great write!
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[cfix]

Ah a heart with an open book look,
Very impressive write.
Very emotional write.
I like this.

[E.M.Oglesbee]

one thing I like about this poem, and some of your others i have read, is that it flows very well and makes it easy to read. Some of mine get all jumbled I write in free verse but you seem to keep just enough structure so it all reads very well. I like your style.

[Amanda_Rose]

cute poem, i liked it a lot. it was full of truths and its easily relatable, which are 2 great qualities to have in a piece of writing. nice work.

[Sydney Evans]

Thank you sooo much (:

[GamingGal]

Pros: I'm always interested in poems where the speaker seems to be talking to an inanimate object. Sometimes, though, they aren't done good. This one was, though! I could tell how much you value your diary, which is always good. Getting the reader to feel something is always important to me.

Cons: Nothing except the wrong form of "to" in the second stanza, first line.

Overall: Nicely written, something I enjoyed and made me smile.