My Valley

A way of describing my like for my depression at times. Sometimes it feels nice to just let myself drown.

Sometimes I get sad about everything at the same time.

My valley of happiness disappears,

and I'm stuck in the black again.

I start to think of all the things I could have said and should have said.

I fall deeper from my valley,

my safe keep and I'm stuck in the black again.

I feel the water deep in my lungs.

I'm choking.

I'm choking.

I swear to God I'm f*****g choking.

Sometimes I get sad about everything at the same time.

My valley of happiness disappears,

and I'm stuck in the black again.

I start to think of all the things I could have done and should have done.

I fall deeper from my valley,

my safe keep and I'm stuck in the black again.

I feel the water in my lungs.

But I like it.

I like it

I swear to God I f*****g like it.

Reviews

[Steven]

I've been drinking lots of cognac, and now I shall review your writing. "I could HAVE done and should HAVE done." Otherwise I like it!

[felioness]

Defiant despair...well spoken and edgy . I enjoyed the read!

[Bell-lala]

Nice poem. Has a nice flow to it. Awesome