My Valley

My Valley

A Poem by Tae Notton
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A way of describing my like for my depression at times. Sometimes it feels nice to just let myself drown.

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Sometimes I get sad about everything at the same time.
My valley of happiness disappears,
and I'm stuck in the black again.
I start to think of all the things I could have said and should have said.
I fall deeper from my valley,
my safe keep and I'm stuck in the black again.
I feel the water deep in my lungs.
I'm choking.
I'm choking.
I swear to God I'm f*****g choking.
Sometimes I get sad about everything at the same time.
My valley of happiness disappears,
and I'm stuck in the black again.
I start to think of all the things I could have done and should have done.
I fall deeper from my valley,
my safe keep and I'm stuck in the black again.
I feel the water in my lungs.
But I like it.
I like it
I swear to God I f*****g like it.

© 2012 Tae Notton


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I've been drinking lots of cognac, and now I shall review your writing. "I could HAVE done and should HAVE done." Otherwise I like it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Defiant despair...well spoken and edgy . I enjoyed the read!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice poem. Has a nice flow to it. Awesome

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on August 25, 2012
Last Updated on November 5, 2012
Tags: depression, happiness, stuck, death, suicide, choking

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Tae Notton
Tae Notton

Bristol, Bristol, United Kingdom



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