Ilex

Ilex

A Poem by d. c. smith

Your leaves were once green,

Your berries so red

I hung you, it seemed,

With ashes on my head

You smelled so sweet,

Like perfume in February

I'm the stump of a tree

The girls are gone--none left to marry

© 2009 d. c. smith


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this makes me think. i like that.

"i'm the stump of a tree" i like that metaphor.

"you smelled so sweet,
like perfume in february."
nice.

'tis a good poem dear lad.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i love when i cant tell what certain things mean

Posted 14 Years Ago


hmm..
well its interesting and simple but a nice write
Good job

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 12, 2009
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A Poem by d. c. smith