Limbo

I change my chant to an enlightend tone,

You see the smile, you are welcomed home,

 

I greet you near this delightful view,

Situational embrace of solid truths,

 

Happy to see you the delight is mine,

I'm shocked in aw when you walk right by,

 

I turn around and the picture is clear,

I'm still gone and your still not here..

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Sometimes, the greatest distance lies between those we love. Neither here nor there and nowhere in between, it is the loneliest feeling of all. "Limbo" is succinct and to the point, with a bittersweet sadness between the lines.

Linda Marie

[KaySea]

amazing.

[.]

nice write my friend...
a gorgeous-magnificence amorous-
sentimental flowing piece of poetry.
..I love it...

james:-)

[deeps]

This is amazing, i like this. Love the last two lines.

[Maurice]

The last two lines make the poem. Very nicely done.

[Liza]

this was a beautiful yet sad love letter

[Revolved]

This is awesome! I love this poem.. I really love the last two lines. Well done and greatly written.

[Marlena]

I love the last two lines. I don't think the question mark belongs in the third stanza though, but that could just be me. Nice work :3

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a descriptive moment of ghostly allure~ human emotion and ethereal fabric woven together on an elusive frame~ intriguing write~