The tunnel (with light) quest ?

I was doing poetry quest with my old friend, and he asked me to do TWO poems. I tunnel with light, and a tunnel of darkness.

The tunnel...
Someone trips me,  Knocks me down.
Darkness, memories spinning around.
The he puts me back on my feet,
And leads me to were I can see.
I smile, he winks.
His everything that keeps me walking ...
Through this tunnel with my two bare feet.

Reviews

[Deepsoul1889]

Thankyou (: I will think about that the next time I'm writing (:

[Mahigan]

There's a lot of potential here you should tap into. Making it longer with more detail would make it extremely good.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

very creative and wonderfully curious~

I enjoyed this. I like the rhyme scheme and the amazing flow. {So very nicely written}