six

old ladies walk over the sand with their floppy feat

leaving behind their ways of life

the sound of their low breathing echoes

below the crashing waves of lives being destroyed

a sweet smell of strawberries hang in the sky with only

two more minutes to go on

will you watch as i fall down

crying tears of diamonds

- once upon a time

there lived six people

eating the porridge of oatmeal

they lived from day to day

they grew old and now their footprints

are left behind in the house on the left corner

behind a coconut tree -

inside

the mind

of

a psychopath

that is me looking down upon them

walking slowly

leaving their footprints in my mind

laughter fill the sky with strawberries

they all fall down

down

down.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Woah... how did you think of this? No need to answer... but this is awesome. Haha. I really like this. From that first line, to "a sweet smell of strawberries hang in the sky with only" and ... a coconut tree... to that structure at the end with the word "down". Yup... really nice.