fortysix

The smile across your face makes me laugh hysterical

For no reason at all

Why do these voices not leave me alone?

Driven deep into my bed, my body laid spread across

Monotonic colours, voices of them not leaving me

I drive the nail deeper through my feet

The darkened room

Screams fill my head

The nail digging deeper...

The smile across your face makes me laugh hysterical

These voices in my head never leaving me

I hear them scream, laugh, mocking me

With their eyes closed in the dark...

They open their eyes to look at me for the first time

Like a new born baby they scream when I hit them with the nail

My blood stained across their bodies

Burning acidity of love, the blood of their creator

Killing them

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Whew... you are good at dark, this was really good. Love the descriptions and the depth of the darkness.

[Pratik]

nice read :)

[BlueDreams]

Effective write :-) .. it was quiet great to read ...

[EMF]

Terrific. A stonking read. Thanks for sending it

[Kayla :)]

O.O I like it :) really good.

[_Hanabi_]

i like it ...it is very gd!!!!

[Jane Doe]

Glad you recommended me to read this, I like it(: it's different from what I do.. Mine tends to be about either the good side or the heartbreak and feelings. This is raw perfection I love it!

[Jadela Villotoes]

very detailed. I like it