Gore and Whatnot

It's an unfinished, sarcastic, piece on humanity. Please, criticize me and correct me all you want. This is just an unfinished joke.

It is honestly quite humorous (murder, suicide, rape, genocide, etc.) but people take it so seriously nowadays. The amount of consciousness people have has ruined the once peacefully primitive state we used to live in. Yes, there was still violence, but it wasn’t seen as an issue. There also (funnily enough) wasn’t any real type of mass religion. The religion back then was basically just the forefront of science; for their “gods” were just the sun, moon, stars, etc. This was back before science was as advanced as it is today. Although modern science and life today is seemingly so much greater, if our minds were not as advanced; these things would trivial. In comparison to (let us say) canines, we are far more advanced and we have many more issues. A canine’s concerns are simple at best: food, water, shelter, air, and a mate. Humans need that and (due to our advances) much more.

Our technological sciences has given us great inventions such as Apple iPhones, Chillblast PCs, Beats headphones, and so much more useless drivel. In the past, about even 50 years ago, we did not have these wondrous gadgets. 

Author's Note

Don't take this seriously. I'm a German jester.

Reviews

[Crimson Apples]

Y A S.

A lot more people nowadays will go around playing hero.

Yippeeeee look a me, I saved this chick from something! Since I've done something nice for today, Imma go sell her on the black market ;D
Kay, so BAI guys~ I hope you have a nice daaay.

Anyway, I agree.

[bryan oboczky]

wish i was a cave man... actualy lived in the appilation mountains for 5 months about 3 years ago, waking up outside with the birds and the sun rise nothing beats it. love nature.... ur chick hanging in the tree thing was very well writen, morbid and sorta fucked up, which for one reason or another makes me smile, which is also sorta fucked up... but very well writen--- i feel like my own work lacks "flow" if u find the time to check it out and tell me what u think id appresiate it- apresheate- appreasheate...hmmmm

[Alexandra Hounschell]

Ahhh thats sooo cool, and thank you. I adore fucked up things. I would gladly look over your things when I can (I'm still in school so ugh). Thanks again

[Laura Almeida]

I agree.. and If I may add people like to pretend they have a conscious but they actually don't at all... They like to feel shocked about how people die, are murdered and how abortions are legal.. but if you ask if they would do anything about it they would all stand still and do nothing. Like people that donate food for the homeless shelter but never call the police in the abusive husband on the street that they see hurting the wife.. Maybe I got lost a bit in the middle of my chain of thought but I hope you got what I meant.
I liked your overall message :)

[Alexandra Hounschell]

Ahh I am glad you agree. I did get what you were saying and I am very pleased that you liked my message. Most people get offended by this style of writing, hence why I say not to take it seriously.