Love is Violence

Love is Violence

A Poem by thecoolone52
"

i dont know i tried to write a song

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Love is Violence
 
Love is Violence
When you smash someone in the face
 
Love is Violence
When you literally tear up the place  
 
Love is Violence
When you silence a head case
 
Love is Violence
When you’re in a war with no reward
 
Love is Violence
When the Person gives up because they cant take anymore
 
Love is Violence
When a victory is already on the shore
 
Love is Violence
When you beat someone down so much you cant feel anymore
 
Love is Violence
When you finally feel better
 
Love is Violence
When you put someone weak under the weather
 
Love is Violence
When it’s all about yourself
 
Love is Violence
Enjoy this state of mental health
 
 

© 2008 thecoolone52


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I like the theme. There isn't any emotion that will stir violence more than a mistaken notion of love.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I can think back on some things that ended abruptly and they tore up my place. I can relate to several on the list and I guess that's why I'm single right now! I like the correlation because some people don't know how to love--all they know is destruction and it starts coming out their pores. This is so good, I like the style and powerful emotions. Like a sledgehammer!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like it! I don't like violence, but it happens. Usually, I just frown on so much repetition, but I really like it in this case. Great write!

-Gabe


Posted 16 Years Ago


still is really well written and i like the format. a little hardcore haha but i know thats your style (:


Posted 16 Years Ago


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