A Broken Soul With Emotions

A Broken Soul With Emotions

A Poem by The Fatal Lover

Hard to actually explain this poem...

With every passing moment in this life I live
I am starting to wonder what is the point
A soul that is broken and shattered like mine
Wishes to just go into the darkness of death

But then I think of the people I love
The family who would miss me if I was gone
It causes tears to fall from my dull eyes
Reminding me of the emotions I have

Slowly though everything is turning numb
I am forgetting what true happiness is
Love is just a dream from my dark past
And my soul is starting to fade away

Maybe something will change how I feel
Someone might even save my soul
That is just too hard to be true for me
For I don't deserve to be saved anymore

I hope that when the end finally comes
That is will be painless and fast
For the only emotion I have left
Is the fear of feeling the true pain of death

By: Elizabeth Kilmer [TheFatalLover]

© 2012 The Fatal Lover

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Really nice written. I really know what you mean. It is good to know that I'm not alone with this "problem"

Posted 9 Years Ago

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The Fatal Lover
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