Why did you do this

Why did you do this

A Poem by The Fatal Lover

I thought you were my best friend
But your not anymore

For breaking this guys heart
Who really cared for you

But your lies are getting worse
And nothing matters anymore

I hope your truly happy
For breaking his healed heart

But now i'm done talking to you
This was your last chance

Our friendship is now over
Since you can't think straight.

By: Essentia

© 2010 The Fatal Lover


Author's Note

The Fatal Lover
Rin. Your broke his heart. And lost my friendship. Great job. =(

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i have no comment

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ha Ha just admit it i'm so much more better than you :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

don't know what to say //_@

Posted 13 Years Ago


Last line doesn't seem to flow as well as the rest did, but it also makes it stand out.
So I'm uncertain if I would or wouldn't change that.


Posted 13 Years Ago



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