When time froze in one moment

When time froze in one moment

A Poem by The Fatal Lover

When I looked up at the entrance
I saw you standing near by
And at the very moment
Time seemed to freeze for a second

My heart started racing
And my mind wished you would talk
Wondering if you even saw me
Looking towards your face

But then you just walked on by
Like I did not even exist
Now wondering what may have happened
If you had seen my standing there

Would we have talked like old times
Or yelled at me for stupid actions
Well I will never know
Since you just kept on walking.

By: Essentia

© 2010 The Fatal Lover


Author's Note

The Fatal Lover
Saw my ex today. Now I wonder why.

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I hate my ex's. I know this feeling, I hate it 2.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aww im sorry, give you a hug. Very good poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometimes stuff like that just happens for no reason and you kind of just have to go with it, you know? Good poem :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Everything happens for a reason and almost every time we will never understand why. Good job, well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well don't worry if he left that his loss not yours!

Posted 13 Years Ago


great poem! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


i'm sorry to hear that, but it all happens for a reason though we never find out why. great poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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