I Miss You!

For times, when my love is away and i miss her!

Silences when are prominant,
And lonliness dominant,
I miss you.
When thoughts get aggresive,
And mind talks depressive,
I miss you.
Emotions when loose sanity,
And every appeasement is vanity,
I miss you.
When i am happy and well,
But none i find to share and tell,
I miss you.
Company when i desire,
And when solace i require,
I miss you.
When i think of you my dear,
But you r nowhere near,
I miss you.
But when the thought comes to me,
That you might also be missing me,
I miss you............. .....even more!

Author's Note

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Reviews

[D]

Enjoyed?! It's a weak word.
I can relate so well. A place in my favorites.
I was right, thinking I should dig around your older writes. Beautiful write.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!! so your fortune continues...... :P :P.............
thanks a lot kind poet........means a lot!!!! :) :)

[D]

you're welcome (:

[Leena Madhuri]

enjoyed! just like anything! very very emotional and so heart touching!!!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so so much..........!!! so glad you liked it!!! :) :)

[Richa Verma]

I felt drowned into the poem..!
strong xpression!..deeply emotional...
m lovin it!

[Sami Khalil]

"Company when i desire,
And when solace i require,
I miss you.
When i think of you my dear,
But you r nowhere near,
I miss you. "

[Sami Khalil]

Missing someone we love is very real and powerful feeling of longing. Thank you for highlighting that...A wonderful write...:)...................

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you sami for this kind review! You are very encouraging!!

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:).......................

[Nicole Williams]

Nice rhyme scheme and flow to it,
nicely done ^__^

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a bunch......:-)

[Penny]

When I am happy and well,
But none I find to share and tell,
I miss you.

Just loved these lines. Last stanza is also magical. Just can't get enough of it:-):-)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Wow! Glad that you liked it. Thank you so much!

[Penny]

Ur welcun:-)

[BubblingMe]

Yes, I really enjoy it, it was a nice poem!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot!