Our little moment

Our little moment

A Poem by theunionisloud

That's not what I meant
You misunderstood
But even if you did understand, 
You don't anymore
and it hardly matters
This moment is already over
There is no need to dwell
It's time for a new one
Let's create another
we can start all over again
Right now
































(quick, before I change mind)

© 2011 theunionisloud


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Love the fine print ... fresh starts and perogatives ..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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haha I love the parenthesis at the end - snide almost - yeah a fresh start... if you're quick haha!! nice poem! I like the premise of it too - create your own moments! nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


yeah, nice in theory. interesting blank space afterward.... conceptual?

I think that's page 32 in "Psychology in a Nutshell"

perception is everything and I think you've stated your view clearly, succinctly and now on to the next moment. viola.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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