War

didn't know what to call it

The war of the past is gone,

But the war of tomorrow has not yet begun,

Hear my cries,

Before it’s too late,

Help me save the world,

From our domed fate,

Author's Note

wrote this because I was bored

Reviews

[Ruby]

that is so good

[The dark story]

do you always write poems particularly when you are bored ??????.......i have read those writings of yours in which coincidentally you have written "I was bored"........anyway......i liked this one a lot..it is short but has git the very touch of your emotions.....i particularly like reading writings on "war".so it goes without saying that i am goon like it.......but yes i liked the way you are calling out to the world to save the world from being drowning in the sea of despair and ruins..........great work!!!!!!!!!amazing!!!!!!!!

[Jeleseka]

Great, and your writing is nice. Maybe more emotional words to make it feel something about war.

[RachelReaper]

Somebody please save the world before it ALL goes to hell.... anyways, nice poem, it sounds a bit prophetic.