I am

This is the first good poem i wrote

I am a dove,

That flies through the air,

I am the love,

That we all share,

I am a fish,

That swims through the sea,

I am the wish,

For you and me,

I am a mole,

That lives underground,

I am a soul,

That tries not to make a sound,

I am the hate,

That’s wrapped up in a ball,

I am a mate,

That protects us all.

Author's Note

terrible grammar

Reviews

[Princess_of_Shadows]

wow ...... speachless that was amazing it was really good i like how it ryhmes can it is so sweet as well it was aamazing

[Tea]

It's really good. :)

I always love your poems

[Rhianne Ney]

Grammar doesn't matter in some poems but if you really want to improve this it's never too late to learn. You can ask for some help from others (:
I'm not that good at grammar also but there are somebody here who can help (:

[Weeping Willow]

Yeah, i'm still learning about grammar, but i can't remeber everything i learn which is sad :(

[Rhianne Ney]

That really is sad but you can still review again, right? So, cheer up and lighten a little

[Weeping Willow]

I never let it stop me

[Rhianne Ney]

Of course, dude keep writing