Hyper

Hyper,

You just can't stop.

Dancing, jumping, happy. Still,

You can't stop.

Shaking, full of smiles and sweet cheer.

Jittery, you laugh a lot.

Oh joy.

Reviews

[1 Deep]

I haven't felt like this since I was a kid lol. Sounds like youthfuul joy to my ear.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

haha yeah it is always fun to be hyper ^^ lots of giggles and smiles.

Good Job

[Tierra Starr]

It's even more fun when you are with people who are hyper with you haha Sometimes it can be quite awkward when you're the only one spazzing out :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

haha well thats true xD

[Tierra Starr]

Definitely :)

[Chaos_Collector]

I like how simplistic your poems are. They're concise, but they certainly get the points across. Nice work

Chaos_Collector

[Tierra Starr]

Haha thank you. These are actually my shortest poems. I did them for an assignment and loved them. Most of my poetry is a bit longer. :) I'm glad you enjoyed them!

[Chaos_Collector]

You're welcome! I hope to see more from you!