Wishful Love

wishful thinking

Wishful Love

 

I’ve come to terms that some things, will never change.

I yearn, I want, but if you don’t, those feelings could never be the same.

I could climb the highest mountain or sink beneath the sea.

Nether, will get me closer, nor bring my heart to thee.

 

My heart goes astray in hopes to keep the memories.

Of Entrapped visions of dreams, that will last an eternity.      

 I humble myself for a love, I thought was true.

For a wishful love, I’ll always think of you.

THE END.

 

 

By Mauricio Montoya

 

 

 

 

   

 

 

 

   

 

Author's Note

There was this girl no matter what I’d do I could never get through even thought the feelings where there.

Reviews

[joe shmo]

I like your poems! keep writing! It is good to write from the heart. My poems come from the heart and from the bible my favorite books Song of Solomon which is the lovers chapter, Psalm the uplifting deliverence prayer song chapters Proverbs the wisdom chapter. And some poems I get through prayer and meditation with Jesus. So glad you like them thank you for the review! I had a lot wishful thinking when it came to lovers but I do know the right one will come when I least expect it. It's hard being single but a blessing at the same time. But it all works out for the good I think God saves the best for last :) It is better to let love awaken on it own if ya try and chase it, it seems to run away Haha!!!

[floarealbastra10]

excellent poem

[Marie Harrison]

I feel the same way about my ex-husband. I'll always love him and want him, but he's broken. The way you unfurled your feelings, your actions and your emotions was remarkable. I could feel the beat of your heart in every word of this poem. It's just beautiful.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a beautifu and genuine gem of a poem~

[The Fatal Lover]

I really love this poem. Makes me think of the guy that I love. Even though he won't date me cause of his friends. But this is really good. You should write more. =)

[X]

wow man, i can truly say that i've been hovering around your profile for a while but i never really took the time to check out your material. if this came from the hearts then yours must stroked with paint brushes of utter amazement.

[emmajoy]

Such lovely words .. romantic without being frilly, genuine thoughts and wishes. There's a yearning, a little sad maybe

'Of Entrapped visions of dreams, that will last an eternity' - a great phrase.

[Tia Sanchez]

So beautiful. I love this one!

My heart goes astray in hopes to keep the memories.
Of Entrapped visions of dreams, that will last an eternity.

WoW! These are my favorite lines.

[Marie Harrison]

What an emotional piece, I feel it deep in your heart this write. That's what true love is about, humbling yourself for another. Maybe she wasn't ready for adult love yet. Maybe she doubted her own worthiness. Beautiful emotive write!

[Angel Veselinov]

Really touching and emotional piece. Thanks for sharing you always have good inspirations :) and great things to share thanks again