So I gathered us

Mirrored by minor falls landing on
The smallest cliff of unwound thought
A few belong to days
Relinquish release to your
Some details behind
A perfect flower with ruby lips
Books with pages of teal old stores
Forgotten to be given in golden letters told
Crowns of yearning blue
Tonight to tomorrows the night before dawn
White in essence fragrant fingers crawl
The held beheld
Rouge
Long walks down rendered shores
The lock in great shape
Lined petals
Picking the tip of a desire
Gathering you
Once more

Reviews

[D. Mansfield]

"Forgotten to be given in golden letters told" this is my favorite part of this beautiful poem, thank you

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your words

[Perdition]

"Books with pages of teal old stores"..probably my favorite line of the century, but the staccato shots of varying pictures and affections down to the "Rouge" had me, line after line in this strange sunlight of appreciation. You did it again...wonderfully! Thanks for sharing~

[Nisreen]

Thank you 🙏

[Ken Simm.]

So many beautiful lines in this complete selection of poetic images. I am particularly taken with 'teal old books'. A quite anazing piece.

[Nisreen]

Thank you 🙏 ken

[Adam]

A vivid piece of writing bursting with colour and urgency. Transports me to another place.

[Nisreen]

Sweet
Thanks 🙏

[willweb]

Wow, now this is a sensual piece of writing that takes me along for the journey. Walks along the rendered shore, the melodic sounds, the picking the tip of desire, gathering you once more. Simply enchanting.

[Nisreen]

Thanks will

[SleeplessVolcano]

Ahhh to read a book on one of those unwound cliffs. Bliss!

Great story.

[Nisreen]

Thanks SV
Busy day 😜

[SleeplessVolcano]

lol I have a busy life

[Nisreen]

Today is insane here
I am tired

[SleeplessVolcano]

You should write more poetry. It gives us energy :)

[Nisreen]

😂 ok lol ……..

[SleeplessVolcano]

oh...you didn't know... ;)

[Nisreen]

Lol……………….