Silent Beauty

Butterflies dance in
ballets of silence
wings beating rhapsody in blue

Reviews

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Oh my goodness....I loved it....gentle tender and soft....this poetry floats to one's heart.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a tenderness in your voice... the soft wings of butterflies... sighs of music in the air. Sitting here in such peace... perfect peace in your words. How I can sit in my garden watching butterflies for hours. :)

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Wonderful to have you by, Craig :) Yes I love their soft beauty

[JayceeC]

Gershwin's Rhapsody in Blue is a longtime favorite of mine. I love its energy and many personalities that all seem so busy. A perfect comparison for those flittering little beauties.

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Thank you so much, Jan :))))

[rubie]

Simple and beautiful.

Butterflies absolutely do dance on air, don't they?

They are so elusive, yet such a powerful reminder of nature's wonder.

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Indeed they are Rubie...thank you for your kind visit :)

[just another mac withou..]

simply beauty...well structured and just lovely!

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so sorry. I just saw your review. Thank you very much :)

[just another mac without her]

you are very welcome!

[Adam Adams]

Loved the analogies of your insights. Dancing in silence & beating "rhapsody" in blue? What a thought provoking imagery you've painted the words with. Like always, I still do find a melody of peace in your poetry. Wondrous art, it is!

[sereenaoutloud]

Yes they are beautiful to look at as they dance across the sky to their silent melodies!!
Love this LYNN! :)

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I do too wonder why they're mute sometimes.. and you've penned a possible answer so well. The magic of their beauty behind their fluttering wings evoking the blues. Lovely!
:D

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Gershwin playing a piano of silence...a rhapsody of soft wings beating in sorrow.

the butterfly goes back into its cocoon.

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Ha, brilliant! Your review outshines the poem, Jacob. You should have posted it :))

[wordman]

beautiful music,they are portraying

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Thank you so much, Ron :)))

[wordman]

my pleasure lynn