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Yes Glow AND BE MORE SO...

Yes Glow AND BE MORE SO...

A Poem by ...
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I don't know...it's still rough

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 Yes, glow and be more so...be this sweet and this sour.

           Be alive more than your casual death.

           Rise from the chambers of your stars

                    and never leave me where

                                 your ghost

                              has kissed me

                                  the least

© 2016 ...


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'.. never leave me where .. your ~~ '

There's a sense of wanting more, of having opened the book but not yet read the words. Your two opening lines seem, for me, to look in two directions.. Whatever and however you write, you leave distinct echoes of 'i'm trying to explain, be patient, please.' You write with heart, lynn.. always have, always will.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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2 Years Ago

Thank you Emma for leaving your footprints on my page
Nicely captured Lynn. Has a haunting, echo of an ache unfulfilled within the words.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Nemo :)
No it is not rough. Don't change it it is perfect and it is beautiful.


Posted 2 Years Ago


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2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Ken :)
Alright, so it's 'nother one of my fav!
You stir a very slight taste of exotica with words & nicely blended 'em all with the saliva of your dark visions. Very interesting & deeply written. The mirror of your inner spirit is being refracting & deflecting well of the pilgrims of your BOMBSHELL heart. Excellent work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

You are very kind, Vortex. Thank you
Love the format!! Worked very well.

Read this a few times now and I smile. Quite the thought provoking little piece.

Well written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Troy :)
Some great lines here to appreciate and appropriate. You are gifted....:)))

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Thank you Sami
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You are welcome. ....:)))))))
Another poem that lingers after its read, I think the format does this as you trail off the grid leaving me with thoughts to chew on. I thought this was clever and profound and " never leave me where the ghost has kissed me the least" What a wonderful line! Thanks lynn

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Thank you, Andrew :)
Your few words say so much about what we all need in life so that when death occurs there can be light enough to sustain the one still here. This is deep.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Thank you for your comments, dear poet :)
You know what I love? I love a poem that resonates in me, that I can feel but not quite grok...so I have to carry it away with me and look at it over and over, turn it over to see the underside, hold it up to the light and sleep with it under my pillow until it feels like I understand it.
So, thank you. For this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

hahaha coming from you...an amazing compliment my dear :) Thank YOU for THIS
Personally I liked it a lot. "Be alive more than your casual death." Great line as well as "Rise from the chambers of your stars". So many thoughts are invoked with just these lines and the rest of the poem frames your thoughts nicely.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

So kind, Hare. Thank you for stopping by, dear poet :)

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