The Heart of Imagination

The seasoned evening

strutted a full-faced

orange kool aid moon.

Fully aware it was a marvel

it shot me an arrogant wink.

   Not once but twice.

I think I heard it laugh.

Well, it certainly flashed me an impish smile

not much different than my own

Author's Note

I don't know...just having some fun

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

i really love this ... every line a twinkle and shine ..into the ol' library it goes ..well done my bit of Irish sídhe .... glad you shared your fun with us!
E.

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E...You always brighten my page with your big heart (you)

[Einstein Noodle]

and you mine ma'am! :)))

[Nisreen]

A very playful piece
and light

it is fun

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Thanks for stopping by, Nisreen :)

[barleygirl]

I love your playful personification of the moon in this little vignette. Your word choices are full of imagery & action, but I just didn't like the word "Kool-Aid" which is artificially colored & not reminiscent of any moon I've ever seen. Otherwise, all your impishness is believable & memorable.

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I'm sorry you didn't care for it. Thank you for stopping by commenting :)

[A.W. Carl]

"Orange kool aid moon" is a nice image. Simple, Yet fun.

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Thank you, sir :)

[J.R.H.]

I liked this a lot. It made me smile :)

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I am glad it made you smile :) thank you for reading it, and nice to meet you

[Woody]

a fun wright, Lynn :) the full moon CAN be impish and narcissistic. this is certainly an original poem about the moon. and I like it. now I'll go get me a drink. don't know where that urge came from!!

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hahaha Thank you, my sweet friend :)

[Woody]

damn, look how I wrought write! scatterbrain!

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I figured you was just leaving evidence that you had been drinking...laughing

[Woody]

I won't lie to you. I AM.

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You read my poem. Tell me if that doesn't sound like a buzz on steroids haha

[Woody]

am I the only one drinking? :)

[Matching Socks]

This is fun. Kool-aid moon, I just love that.

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:) Thank you. It was fun to write

[Ed Hart]

lots of fun here...i'm glad for you and your happy moon...'kool-aid', cool, indeed...

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kiss your cheek...Hi Ed :---)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so you too, a kool-aid moon?

so if i look at the moon tonight, and think it is smiling, that is you winking?

well, do it twice so i can be sure...

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laughing...I'll be sure to do it twice so you believe me :-)