Prick

Prick

A Poem by David Elijah
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aprilthird2018. A song. A rap.

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Rose thorns gonna prick my fingers.
I'm a sick creature I desire your attention.

Consistent repeating sin.
Still go to church retreats and s**t.
Just a convict blending in.
Never show true colors chameleon..
There's greed within my soul.
My intentions bullet holes.
Hundreds of them in my skull.
Cause I'm so sick of sinning alone..
Cause my mind so broken.
My blue turns colorless.
Like the ice I skate so thin.
Now what's the use in blending in..
I'm tire'd of being evil on my own.
I wish this life would go in fastford.
So I stay scrollin' on my phone.
Tryina pass the time so pass the Rose..

thorns gonna prick my fingers.
I'm a sick creature I desire your attention.

I'll be on the outside.
Terrified.
Trying to hide.
And I don't mind.

And I'm scared of change.
All my shades.
No more grey.
It's black and white.

Rose thorns gonna prick my fingers.
I'm a sick creature I desire your attention.

© 2018 David Elijah


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David Elijah
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This poem/rap is great, but you have some errors you might want to correct, but I love it, keep up the great work...

Posted 6 Years Ago


David Elijah

6 Years Ago

The only misspellings I see are tryina and fastford. I spelled them like that because that's how I'd.. read more
Sanbino Rodriguez-White

6 Years Ago

I expected that much but I know your a bit if a perfectionist I was making sure :D
David Elijah

6 Years Ago

Lol yea true

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David Elijah
David Elijah

Tacoma, WA



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I tend to write when I'm sad. I'm basically dumping all my poetry and lyrics here lol. Baptist, 19, Korean-American, meme addict, love listening to and making music, all time favorite record is Spr.. more..

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