I Feel Guilty

I Feel Guilty

A Poem by David Elijah
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junefifth2018. i feel guilty because i tripped someone while playing basketball and everyone still thinks it was an accident.

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sorry if i made you feel stupid
i had no intention to do it
im the dumbest person i know
that's why my words can be ruthless

sometimes my words can slip
and make someone innocent feel like s**t
but other times they cross me and i get angry
and i make their hearts pay the penalty

if you laugh again imma cause a issue
try to juke these hands imma trip you
make that smart mouth of yours hit the gym floor
cause the free throw line tryina kiss you

(these thoughts make me the guilty one)

© 2018 David Elijah


Author's Note

David Elijah
review! punctuation has been thrown out the window for this one lol.

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I like the ending it made me feel things also lowkey sounded like rap lyrics and I dig that

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David Elijah

5 Years Ago

LUL yea it was suppose to be rap but i didn't know what to say after that. thanks for the review!
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i noticed... i like how confrontational and conversational this comes off

Posted 5 Years Ago


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David Elijah

5 Years Ago

lol yea this is likely my most aggressive writing

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David Elijah
David Elijah

Tacoma, WA



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I tend to write when I'm sad. I'm basically dumping all my poetry and lyrics here lol. Baptist, 19, Korean-American, meme addict, love listening to and making music, all time favorite record is Spr.. more..

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