weird heart

weird heart

A Poem by vaishnavi
"

it's common to all...

"

our heart is very weird...
it attaches to anyone,
without thinking anything.

it don't see who it is
 or what it will cost
it neither think that the person
to whom it is going to attach loves you
 just it goes on attaching

whether the person opposite
don't even know who are you
but the heart just in the first sight
gets attached

whether u see him/her on t.v
or anywhere
your heart think this is made for you

you started dreaming of it
knowing very well that
the person about whom you are dreaming
will not be yours

you try to understand your heart
 but still
it just keeps on dreaming

and when that lovely dream breaks
the pain you feel
is the most painful pain
no one can imagine that pain
except u in the world

anyone of yours around you
tells that he/she
likes you

at the first time you ignore
but in the second time
your heart starts thinking about that
and then at the third it falls in love

but when you check the reality
your heart gets the news
 that it was all rumor

and then the world laughs at you
and you seem to be a fool in front of all
but that foolish heart
in the next time, repeats that mistake
and attaches to other person
because it is not in our control
neither ours and nor of our brain
because the heart is weird.......


© 2014 vaishnavi


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in the next time, repeats that mistake
and attaches to other person
because it is not in our control.

Well said and truly right. Why you think so, I can sensed.
Humor and hand both are amazing. Loved it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

hmm...........
I enjoyed it! I agree with the heart being weird... That fool :p

Posted 6 Years Ago


vaishnavi

6 Years Ago

thank you for enjoying it :)
I really like but i don't think you need to he/she cause you can just say their/there/they but I love it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


vaishnavi

6 Years Ago

thank you very much i appreciate your review :)
this really got me thinking! that's what poetry is all about after all. making people think and feel
:) thanks for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


vaishnavi

6 Years Ago

thank you for a wonderful review
this is a beautiful poem very well penned :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


vaishnavi

6 Years Ago

thank you very much
I absolutely love this. You are so right. There is too much truth in this. The heart is so weird. Hearts fall easily, get broken too much, and often takes too long to be repaired. We will fall for anyone that gives us any attention. A crush is the beginning of the heart falling under a spell. In the process, the world is laughing because it will fall into the dark like the rest of the broken hearts. This has a nice meaning, smooth flow, and beautifully written! I only noticed one consistent mistake and that's the spelling error "weather". Weather is a noun. Maybe you were meaning the word "whether." Even the best writers make small mistakes such as that. This is pure excellence. Continue writing! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


vaishnavi

6 Years Ago

oh yes the spelling is wrong...
anyways this is a gr8 review i really appreciate this :)
Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect

6 Years Ago

You are very welcome, anytime. :)
Hahaha..the heart sure is a very weird thing. I like how you made such simple words to come out so beautifully.

Posted 6 Years Ago


vaishnavi

6 Years Ago

it is similar with your poem on the other side of bank
thank you for this lovely review
i personally enjoyed reading this, although i must confess the word attachments could be better still it does not take away the fact that this poem does summarize our hearts, "weird' as they are, thanks for sharing this honest piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


vaishnavi

6 Years Ago

thank you very much for this lovely review
this poem is beautiful!
loved reading it!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


For Who I Am

6 Years Ago

Wow! IvoryVine took the words! Great JOb!!!!!!
Author Rucha Joshi

6 Years Ago

thanks dear!
vaishnavi

6 Years Ago

: )

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