Because Stars are born for Shining

Because Stars are born for Shining

A Poem by vaishnavi



There are some stars in the sky
which are not much bright
but are very dull
they think that other stars are shining a lot
they often call them ' OVER-SHINER '
but it is the thing for proud for other stars
actually they should shine more
so that no one could look into their eyes
because the REAL STARS are born for shining

© 2014 vaishnavi


Author's Note

vaishnavi
actually the girls of my class often call me over shiner as they are jealous of me. so i got the idea to write this as a reply of their harsh words
by the way leave a comment after reading :)

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I love this poem. Most writers praise stars for their proud glimmers but here I like the fact that there are competitions between them. Creative write!

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

was what friends called me in my school days 'Over shiner'
so i write this poem
Love this one, It's just your wording that makes me love it!

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

its gr8 to hear that from u
thank you very much :)
You have done the right thing vaishnavi. You have concentrated your energy and time to something useful rather than fighting with those girls of your class. keep it up. :) its a beautiful poem. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks Priya for motivating me
and glad u like the poem
priya

5 Years Ago

you are welcome :)
Very nice poem Vaish.Never let the jealousy of others ever dull your shine :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

thanks for such a lovely review and i will never let them dull my brightness :)
thanks a lot<.. read more
Vidya Bacchus

5 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
It is difficult to be a Real Star among the millions of stars in the sky...

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

of course it is difficult to be a real star among the millions but we should never give up and alway.. read more
Happy hours

5 Years Ago

indeed
real stars are born for shining... indeed.

Posted 5 Years Ago


because the REAL STARS are born for shining .its an amazing read i can relate too

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

glad that anyone relates with this poem :)
Real Stars are indeed born for shining. But remember that stars shine, because they burn. It's soothing to see them from afar. But nothing can get close to a star. You are a star, no doubt, just control the heat for the one who can complete you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


vaishnavi

5 Years Ago

i do totally agree with this review.
stars shine cuz they burn similarly i do as i have tolera.. read more

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