Memories

Sometimes we lose the one we love

                           Memories
Memories of you lay siege to my mind,
Ribbons of longings my heart doth entwine,
Away you have flown with winged ease,
As my soul searches for you in each wafting breeze.

 

Gentle assurances bear no burden,
As the space between us widens,
Eloquent silence ravages my phyche,
Even as I cling to your cherished memory.

Deep within the folds of my tortured existence,
Tendrils of regret garner me no chance,
To  traverse the void between us two,
For I am here and there are you.

 

Chaotic dreams bring your fevered embrace,
But when I awaken I am torn from this place,
And reality intrudes bearing reasonless rhyme,
To each their own space and own time.

Author's Note

Be kind,and thank you for taking the time to read.

Reviews

[Penny]

The comparisons you have made are just awsm. The poem hits you instantly and finds a place in your heart. Truly, seperation is something we don't look fore to and the worst, we talk to dat person on phone or simthing, want to meet him but when we happen to meet, its kinda awkward and no one knows what to talk about. Wonderful write.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thanks Penny :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Excellent work here... powerfully sincere. Poetry that is truly felt.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This means a lot .Thank you Poetic.

[Baby Ricochet]

Good rhymes. Sad subject. Good one

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you BR.

[Saddam]

Deep within the folds of my tortured existence,
Tendrils of regret garner me no chance,
To traverse the void between us two,
For I am here and there are you.
Deeply attached with this awsome poetry of pain in love. beautifully crafted and well imagined. Thanks for sharing. Loveya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Ssadd.Love ya too :)

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

really well done!!!!!! :D

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Lucy :)

[Lucy Morningstar ♥]

anytime, my friend :)

[Sami Khalil]

Beautiful style , marvelous elegance...Bravo................

[Vidya Bacchus]

Much thank you's Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome much...:)........................

[Frieda P]

Reason-less rhyme, I know it well. You've pen'd it with style Vidya, although the pain bleeds through on your page. Well said my friend.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Freida.Your words mean a lot because I love all your work :)

[Frieda P]

You're sweet Vidya, you had me at that first line...muchly enjoyed my friend. :-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

......................:)

[Jack...]

I liked this and I know this feeling of being apart from one you care for deeply. Even if there is or was some darkness...love always adds a sense of light. Very nicely penned.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you Jack.True,true all true.

[Shaquana Adams]

"Chaotic dreams bring your fevered embrace,
But when I awaken I am torn from this place,
And reality intrudes bearing reasonless rhyme,
To each their own space and own time."

This is awesome, it reminds me of my poem "I must be dreaming". This is wonderful. Thanks for sharing.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Thank you so much for your kindness:)

[Shaquana Adams]

You're welcome :)