Pieces (Part 1 of 3 )

Pieces (Part 1 of 3 )

A Poem by heartsinice
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Part 1 of a 3 series of poems.

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You left me holding all the pieces after you broke me
I'm not even sure I have them all
If not, there will always be a piece of me missing 
Now there is only memories of how you use to hold me 
With attention to detail,  you would never allowed a crack in our love
What changed to were you handled us so carelessly?
When I felt your grip loosening I turned a blind eye 
Now the blame is my own for being blindsided from this decision 
You left me holding all the pieces  

© 2018 heartsinice


Author's Note

heartsinice
PART 2 will come after 50 reviews are given on this segment

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Wonderful and powerful use of words and thoughts. Glass heart will be broke and never be complete again. I did like the poem. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In that case we've got millions of masterpieces existing on the earth!
Well, deadline of 50 reviews for part two?! That'd do much delay nor twill happen too sooner...G'luck! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

keep going, I'd like to see more

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really heart breaking
I have also been through this too
I hope this doesn't affect you
Pls move on

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

heartsinice

2 Years Ago

I am sorry that you had to experience this pain! I pray for your healing! I haven't gone through thi.. read more

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Added on August 12, 2018
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heartsinice

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