The Beach

The beach looked beautiful with the sea clear as a sapphire and the sand as soft and pale as silk. Birds gracefully swept up and down the horizon. The wind blew softly through the clouds. People strode up and down the beach casually, soaking their feet wet and sand glued to their  feet, making pair of white, personal-tailored shoes that feels like delicate silk. The lazy clouds swayed gently in the sky, dancing to the beats of the wind.

Author's Note

It was from a sentence, "The beach looked beautiful. Birds were flying around and the wind was blowing. People were trying to walk. The clouds moved in the wind."
The sentence was from my workbook. Hope you like it!

Reviews

[Holden Zacarias]

Beautiful piece. I ironically read it while at the beach and the imagery is spot on. Short, yet very sweet.

[Kurayami]

Thank you~

[Isabelle Grace]

Love it! It creates a great mental picture and I can imagine myself on the beach.

[Kurayami]

Thank you~

[Audrey Kanyera]

I love the beach and I love the picture you paint with your words. It just takes me to the beach while I am in my living room

[Kurayami]

I'm glad. Thank you~

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Oh wow I love it I am so glad it isn't too long
I can't usually read stories that are very long it depends I guess.


I love the Ocean I love the beach and shells you got it right on
target I have a Bunch of different Beach Ocean poems on here if
you do Enjoy that :)



Thank you for sharing this calm peaceful piece and thank you for your lovely
review and Comments you left on my page.


Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Kurayami]

Thank you~

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome. was a pleasure to read enjoyed it. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Wonderful all the beauty of the sea, winds and people enjoying the sea shore is clubbed beautifully. Very nice to read!

[Kurayami]

Thank you.

[❀Subaru_Nyaa!
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I think that the word you are looking for in this part "threw the" is (Through The)

[Kurayami]

Thanks for pointing that out for me.