Love and Life

You say you love me
You say you care

But when i need you
You are not there

You say im yours
You say you're mine

But i dont feel complete
I'm like a broken line

The words are great
And mean so much
But they are not enough
I need your touch

Lost in my own head
I sit here alone
Will i ever be happy
Will i find one to call my own.

Reviews

[Imperfection]

Another great write from you.

This is sad too.
We have expectations from those we love but they leave us disappointed so many times.
How is one supposed to cope with that when there is already more to deal with?

[DarkAngelWriter]

Awww dude, I loves it. See? I can enjoy something about love! ^_^

[Emily B]

Reads like an adult children's book, which is really amazing. Clear, concise and emotional you really get your point across.

[emily]

so sad yet so beautiful. great piece.

[Charlotte Rose]

Makes me cry and feel for you.. One day i pray that you will find the happiness that you deserve.. You are the Bestest friend that i have ever had and deserve the BEST!!! You have a great talent and I am happy you are sharing IT!!