Spring is Springing

Signs of spring

The winter

Snows melting

Drip drip dripping

The morning sun

Dewdrop kissing

Sparkles radiating

The birds

Lawn congregating

Twitter singing

The flowers

Petals unfurling

Water coloring

The wind

Flowers caressing

Air perfuming

The bunnies

Rabbit hole peaking

Hop hop hopping

The children

Outside playing

Summer dreaming

The calendar

March 20th announcing

Spring is springing

Author's Note

Poetry is not really my thing, but I wrote this for a young friend here at the cafe. He is teaching me.

Reviews

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

The birds

Lawn congregating

Twitter singing




The flowers

Petals unfurling

Water coloring

.....................Madame, what a beautiful string of poetic words! The season springs up like anything. Very soft and memorable wordings! With regards.

[Barbara Walker]

Descriptive words on my favorite season of the year! For not being your thing, bravo! Kudos!
Barbara

[Kora Williams]

Poetry may not be your thing, but this is beautiful and I MUST say that you have a wonderful talent. Cant wait to read more!

[An owl on the moon]

In your words there is a light and life abounding... the sweetness of spring coming out to dance a jig and bring us hearts filled with smiles and sighs... Loved it!

[Summer'sBreeze]

Beautiful.

[AK]

Awesome poem! I really liked it. Your style in poetry is distinct-short lines and many stanzas. But if I must critique it on a more refined level, I might say that you could try editing the syllable chart in order to produce a poem of greater flow. Your use of words could also be standardised-use simple, colloquial language or exotic, poetic language THROUGH OUT the poem. Using both can sometimes result in a rather mediocre imagery. Dear me, I should stop! Great write!
Akanksha Suresh

[just is]

Enjoyable read, Liked this alot, you did a wonderful job!

[Amer Almadani]

Madame, it was a beautiful comprehensible poem. I salute you.

I'll send you a poem to review and ponder its architecture.

[cody mclaughlin]

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[cody mclaughlin]

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