Trouble from the start

Trouble from the start

A Poem by watch_the_world

You were my best friend 

The best friend I had always dreamt about.

The best friend I wanted ever since I was a little girl. 

You have it all. 

You've showed me so much about the world, about love and about myself. 

I found love all because of you. 

In the end it all boils down to you.

You said you'd always love me no matter what, forever and ever. 

 

The truth about forever? 

Forever doesn't exist. 

Love never lasts 

Memories fade 

Dark clouds gloom overhead 

Happiness never lasts.  

 

I can't tell you how much it hurts to let you go. 

It's what's best. 

I drag you down. 

I rub your face in the dirt. 

I'm sorry but this is goodbye 

This is farewell 

This is me wishing you the best. 
This is saying I'm sorry. 

I'm no good for you. 

I'm just 

Trouble from the start. 

© 2011 watch_the_world


Author's Note

watch_the_world
Written on iPod so capitalization is off. Too lazy to go fix it :p Tell me what u think :)

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This has a very powerful message. Friends forever, sometimes ends. Great work! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this poem. A different point of view. Hard to write about escaping. The people who are running. Rarely write of the escape. I like the honest words and emotion. Thank you for the powerful poem. I have wrote a few poem about leaving. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 5 people found this review constructive.

its interesting....truthful but noone is good enough for you

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wonderful word choices. I love the style of this poem as well. I especially love the beginning of the last stanza. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This hooked me in the with the very first line, I really liked reading this :))

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think me favoriting this can say a lot more right now than my worded speech could, lol.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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