Stranger

Ive always had a purpose,

Ive always known what that purpose was.

Always followed its odd twists and turns.

Always obeyed its every command.

You were my purpose.

And now that youre gone,

 

I feel like a stranger in my own life.

Author's Note

Random thing I just kinda came up with... Im thinking about adding more at a later date... what do you think?

Reviews

[Brandon]

i like this a lot, pretty happy i came across it actually, i'm going through something right now where this is really easy to relate to. So thanks oh yeah again it was really good.

[Gabby]

i.. love... it.

[Kate Hunter]

I like it. It's very hard-hitting for me, though, I've had plenty of losses for everybody.

[gymnasticsgirl-101]

I think its really good. You don't need to add anything.

[dieuxsansculte]

I don't think you need to add anything. The last line sums it up perfectly. It reminds me of something I wrote a long time ago.

[alexlessah]

I think it is really good!

[Shelbeh-Saur-Rawr-Ness]

I really liked it. Really good write.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Beautiful relatable feelings that ring so true. Love it :)

[Jeremy Baker]

I know this feeling - you captured it well.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. A honest and direct poem. Life allow us to know happiness and know when we are alone. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote