(50) Neva Flores

Written in 2010 for my special friend

Never has such a beautiful heart
Ever been beating, never apart
Visions of perfection in a friend
Always there, to care and tend

Few will see, how special you are
Love you give that is felt from afar
Only you, make us alive, make us pure
Relaxing us with words, true and sure
Each time you visit, is a special day
Showing sweet harmony in our own way

Reviews

[Rachel]

beautiful words , beautiful story , beautiful love in this piece .... however again i think the flow is chopped by certain lines one of them being : "only you, make us alive, make us pure" ... the prose is fantastic and beautiful but the rhythym of a poem is what makes it more than just prose it makes it an art , a piece of poetry

[Murtuza]

Lovely :)

[Jeremy Wyatt]

Yup she is a wee bit special our friend, nice one Chris X

[Poeticadia]

A wonderful gift of poem for a friend.

[MichelleClay]

What a really beautiful poem. Loved the 'few will see, how special you are' All I can say is bravo Chris. X

[Derek S.Keck]

Great tribute to our most beloved!

[cfix]

So sweet and lovely.
Such a wonderful write.
I enjoyed the beauty of your words.
Well written!

[Sukriti Suki]

Very well written... engrossing.

[Hatchling]

this is so sweet. Good job!!

[White Ink]

great :)

[Coyote Poetry]

She is a kind and sweet woman. When we praise a person for her kindness and friendship. You have honor the person and the writer. A wise person knows and recognizes the good people around them. A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote