(53) Queen Of Spades

Tasting a love that is forbidden,

I surrender to her dark touch.

Knowing that temptation has won.

 

She is called the Queen of spades,

And she is playing with my heart.

I am going to lose the game.

 

I thought I was the one in control,

But I was placed under her spell.

A man can never win against beauty.

 

You play with the cards you are dealt,

A victim where you can never bluff.

When you know the odds are against you.

 

The Queen of spades makes the rules,

Where she will take all you have.

The final price will always be your soul.

 

I am one of many that was her prize,

Because she plays the game too well.

In darkest passion, you can never win.

Author's Note

This is a new one written here first.

Reviews

[M.Babu]

"She is called the Queen of spades,
And she is playing with my heart."
I just have to state that i really understood this line. Queen of spades and your heart? Wow that was so damn creative right there:)


i love the comparison to a game of cards. You've really bluffed your way through this piece! Awesome thought behind it! Good one

[Judy Ponceby]

Excellent write, Chris. Enjoyed this.

[Cerebriation]

Your writing so reminds me of my own. you still certainly have a way with words! Keep it up!