Gothic Melancholia

another melancholia musing.

 

 

 

Gothic Melancholia

 

The beautiful entity that hides in the walls of insecurities,

Drenched in septic opinions.

Purity in a brink of lost from the influence of invisible fears,

Drowning, almost - breathlessness…

Little bit of innocence and its essence, survived!

Making life still worthwhile.

 

 

 

 

written:

5/29/2014

Author's Note

Credits to the photo to its respected owner, found in google images.


feeling vulnerable makes me sick easily. Now I'm sick(stomach pain, dirty water infection), feeling down, and growing old(birthday is coming,few more days.) :)

thanks for reading my friends, sorry if I am not arround much, I just don't feel well. Despite all that, I am still surviving life!

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I love the topic and the photo of Gothic cathedral...One of my favorite styles in architecture! Your poem gives really melancholia and little hopelessness, but as always comes to the conclusion of light and future...All around us is meaningful and worthy. We are pieces from the universe, and we need to stay in ourselves and do as much as possible for our inner beauty...We always have to express our essence and be true!

:: nour ::
Oct.23.

[gabrielle]

cryptic message in here pax. such short piece but it took me sometime to come up with an interpretation. Here's what i got from this piece: i interpreted the beautiful entity as the unborn child. the expectant mother, however, is reluctant whether to continue on with her pregnancy because of fear and insecurities but in the end she chose to give life. i know this interpretation is off in a tangent. LOL. BTW happy birthday in advance :)

[Pax]

cryptic ba? I like that interpretation, like a breathe of fresh air. Thanks Gab... my bday is coming and i am getting old na..haha

[Sami Khalil]

Rest assured when you are feeling down that your good friends are thinking about you, feeling with you, praying for you. We all go through those ups and downs in life and that is natural but people differ in their responses to things and how to handle the situation(s). Sorry you are feeling that way but things will get better eventually. An excellent truthful write...:)...............

[Pax]

Sami, my good friend and brother. Thank you so much... I always feel bless to have you around... the prayers is always cherished through my up and downs..

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly....:)............

[Muse]

Hey long time now read. Hope you get feeling better soon. Birthdays are not about getting older, you only get wiser and age into a finer kind of fabulous wine. ha ha ha

Seriously hope you get better soon.

I love the art, the title is catchy. It does however seem to reflect your current mood. Dark and fragile. But, even your darker self has a raw kind of beauty.

Be well...

Muse

[Pax]

hugs, its nice to see you around my friend, its good to see you back. haha, you made me smile - yeah we all lost our youth but we gain better wisdom and much for freedom, so its a good start for me.

Hopefully this infection gets better, I have beed self-medicating, for weeks now, it comes and goes, i hate it, and i don't like going to the doctors(very costly).

Thank you Muse my friend, its really nice to hear from you.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so sorry you are not feeling well Pax.
this is a very strong poem...and very interesting...the idea of "septic opinions" the way you make this like two poems in one.

well done. feel better.

jacob

[Pax]

Thank you so much my friend, I hope so too, I am grateful to your kind review my friend, always!