BodY foR HirE

This Job feeds me
This gives my everyday needs
This gives lust, desire, passion
                and everything pleasurable.
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These Lips touches so many lives
This Body reaches so many heights
my Life had passed so many challenges
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This Heart is empty all the time
This Soul has been alone all along
my Life was only for me along time ago.

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Author's Note

Edited for error 3.

Reviews

[Gene Hiccup]

hey, your poem's content is a painful truth in some people's life...through
the three last line of your poem:
This Heart is empty all the time
This Soul has been alone all along
my Life is only for me along time ago.
i have felt the hopelessness and misery by people who have this kind of job.

[Barbara Walker]

"These lips touch" Other than that, good poem!

[GunMetal]

Just a couple corrections:
"This Lips touches" should be "These Lips touch"
"my Life is only for me along time ago" I'm not actually sure what you meant to say here but I think it's supposed to be "my Life was only for me a long time ago."
This piece speaks with the profound emptiness that comes with such a lifestyle. It's simple, yet it does what it needs to do. Nice work.

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice work, and I really admire the way you write, well done.

[Kuhr Gred]

:) GREAT WRITE .. thanks for sharing

[Layla J Omorose]

Great poem..a simple truth for many people in the world. I saw one error though this line here "This Lips touches so many lives" change "this" to "these" and it makes more sense in the sentence and flows better with the poem. Well penned.

[MoriartyMesa]

I felt, well something more terrible than usual. This was deep. and I am honestly at a loss for words

[Michael X]

this poem paints the canvas of a sad truth, a despair that overshadows
someone's destiny to the point of hopelessness, brilliantly composed.

[khalid]

i cant imagine how people doing this job are living, i dont think they really do..what is worse in life than losing ownership of your own body?

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

A very deep, sad poem. Excellent.

[eeoopig]

So dark and pain-filled, good work. Makes me feel kind of miserable - I like it ^.^