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What You do to me My Love

What You do to me My Love

A Poem by Lunar Pup

I'm laying on the ground crying

Sweet silver close to my flesh

I want you to see my pain

The bane of my life...


Sweet silver you're the only one I can trust...

Giving me what I want so bad

A moment of pure bliss

A sweet crimson kiss

 

Everything else seems to leave me crying in pain

Can't you see what you do to me my love?

Your the one who has led me to this

This black abyss...

 

One moment you make me feel so special

And the next, my heart gets crushed

How is this fair

But I always seem to care...

 

I want to smile...

I don't want to cry anymore my love...

Can't you see what you do to me?

Can't you hear my crimson plea?

 

I don't know what to say to you...

Because I don't know whats true anymore...

I don't know if I can handle this...

Tonight you make me crave my crimson bliss.

© 2009 Lunar Pup


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Wow its beautiful and not weird at all.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is so awesome. each poem seems to be better than the first

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Lunar Pup
Lunar Pup

Boone, IA



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I really only write poetry... but it helps me let out stress so i do it in my free time... i write about basically anything but it all has meaning to me... and i cant rhyme.... well actually im gettin.. more..

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